Comments on: A Dottie tribute http://www.lesbiandad.net/2008/04/a-dottie-tribute/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 13:15:45 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: annz http://www.lesbiandad.net/2008/04/a-dottie-tribute/comment-page-1/#comment-102185 annz Wed, 16 Apr 2008 04:36:40 +0000 http://lesbiandad.net/2008/04/15/a-dottie-tribute/#comment-102185 What narrative panache! My favorite section: The son was eating almost all the candy. “Now,” said James, “what should we do now? Eat all of the candy? Now what should we do? Hang on! What’s play?” “Play is play,” said Dottie to James. James didn’t know what play meant. Looking through the window is very impossible. "Hang on!" especially. And the least sentence is deep, very deep. What narrative panache!

My favorite section:

The son was eating almost all the candy.
“Now,” said James, “what should we do now? Eat all of the candy? Now what should we do? Hang on! What’s play?”
“Play is play,” said Dottie to James. James didn’t know what play meant.
Looking through the window is very impossible.

“Hang on!” especially. And the least sentence is deep, very deep.

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